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Meeting times for 2012-2013

Through the winter the meeting times will be conducted on the second Wednesdayof the month at 1pm. (This used to be 2pm but due to other church meetings we have had to bring the time forward) During the summer, after daylight saving, (October) the meeting times will be on the second Wednesday at 7.30pm. Meetings are held at the Catholic Church Meeting room in Alexandra Road, Ulverstone.

  Next general meeting will be on April 11 when we will revert back to to day time meetings at 1pm. Future meeting dates: May 9th at 1pm; June 13th at 1pm.

Online membership

One of the things that we as members know all too well is that sometimes it is impossible to attend meetings on a regular basis if not at all. We would encourage members or potential members to consider joining the club and use online facilities to submit work for the competitions, for appraisal and critiqing. This eliminates the need for people to travel and makes it easier to be a member in their own time. Membership forms can be found on the contact page and any writings or questions can be sent via the clubs email: fawtas@y7mail.com



COMPETITION DATES AND CONDITIONS FOR 2012


All entries require a separate sheet, stipulating which competition they are entering with their name, address and contact details. The applicants name must not appear on the work submitted. Stories should, preferably be typed. Use a standard font and size, 12pt, Times New Roman or Arial.  1.5 line spacing and paragraphs must be indented except for the first line under a heading. Left alignment and justify acceptable and pages need to be numbered. A SSAE must be sent if you require your material returned. Part of the conditions of entry is that the FAWNW is able to use any entry in their newsletter or on their website. The submission must not have won any previous award or have been published. Entries accepted by mail or email. (If sent by email you will still have to send your entry fee by mail) Send your entry to: fawtas@y7mail.com or to FAWNW COMPETITIONS, P. O. Box 538, Ulverstone, 7315. Cost is $5.00 per entry.

The first competition for 2012 is open to anybody wishing to enter. It is for a poem up to 48 lines and the deadline is June 13. The entry fee is $5.00 and the winners prize is $50.

The second competition is open to anybody wishing to enter. It is for an open short story up to 2000 words. The deadline is November the 14. Entry fee is $5.00 and the winners prize is $75.00.

The third competition is for FAWNW members only and it is the Jean Roberts Memorial Story for children (age from 5-12) up to 2000 words. The entry fee is $2.00 and the prize is being donated by Yvonne Fogarty.

Note: Last year the club ran four competitions and it was found that due to other committents by members we had some logistical problems. We intend to keep our four competitions as such but reduce them by one and have one an internal comp and then in the following year move them around. Prizes for the open competitions have been increased.


  NEWS ON ANTHOLOGY

Recommendations from the Committee

The preferred option for the size of the book is A5 and that we should try and keep the number of pages to around 100. At the end of the anthology we include a bio for each of the writers. Also we should include the clubs mission statement. A suggested title:  Finding a  Voice

Submissions have now closed and all electronic files are now being finally compiled  (A further seven entries were found to not have been submitted as electronic files)  Graeme  Bourke is to put the  manuscript together and then email out to  active members for comment and editing for the next meeting in May.


Window on The World

The clubs dispay is set up at Window on The World Bookshop in Reiby Street, Ulverstone. Members work along with details about the FAWNW are available to the public.



Placings for the 2011 poetry competition

First was Brenda Slavoff with "Madonna Lily"
Second was Katherine Tongs with "The Farmers Daughter"
Third was Pat Coy with "Images of Fire"


MADONNA LILY

Your name is a vision ofquiet cloisters,
Pale hands stilled, white banded heads bowed,
Candles reaching upwards
Verses rising in suprano hymns
Light is penetrating narrow archways
And incense wavering in benediction
As soft voicesrecite prayers in unison
White paged books are open
White fingers lead the way for eyes
Concentration hovers as a dove in landing
Still airborne, peacefully held aloft
Beyond earth, within reach
Of hope and faith, encompassing love,
Wings opened in charity to the world.
Madonna Lily's petals stretch up and out
in estatic abandoment.

Comments from the Judge
Very imaginative, and utterly beautiful. Every Analogy complete in itself, but yet they all combine, to conjure up the sanctity of quiet cloisters.


THE FARMERS DAUGHTER

Whistling an old border collie.
Rounding up the last mob.
Running two-tooth ewes
through stony, dusty yards
with failing fences
into a tin roofed
white painted shearing shed.
Catching a sheep
for a weary shearer.
Throwing a soft greasy fleece
onto the wool table
for the classer.
Sweeping up the wool
left on the board.
Taking smoko:
half an hour at 9.30 and 3.00.
Steaming hot coffee,
jam caked scones.
Counting out
at the end of the day.
Moving the shorn
to the front paddock.
Going home
just on dusk.

Comments from the judge
Very evocative. A series of memories, maybe covering just one day, or many, but starting with running up of the mob of sheep - to the end the end of the day and going home, just on dusk.

Placings for Kath Doherty Historical Article 2011
First: Marilyn Quirk-The Curious Transportationof the US Patriots 1839
Second: Marion Thompson-The Trilogy
Third: Allan Jamieson-A History Lesson for Goldfish

Placings for Jean Roberts Memorial Children's Story 2011
First: Sheila Spargo-Jeffrey and the Pterodactyl
Second: Catherine Fair-The Story of Little Raindrop
Third: Judy McCauley-Ben's Boots


 

 

Ben’s Boots

 By

 Judy McCauley

 

 Ben dived towards the football soaring through the air toward him. He took the mark just before it hit the ground.

Jumping to his feet he held the ball triumphantly above his head. Beat that!

‘Great dive’

‘Top mark.’

‘Lucky-y-y,’ yelled his friends.

Ben dropped the football towards his boot and kicked it back across the paddock.

‘Inside Ben, it’s almost dark,’ called his mum over the fence.  ‘Take those filthy boots off outside, then straight into the bathroom,' she ordered before driving off to do some late night shopping.

‘Same time tomorrow,’ called his friends, heading home.

Ben clomped across the muddy paddock and climbed through the hole in the fence. Still thinking about his magnificent mark he opened the back door and sauntered inside the porch.

Then he remembered his boots.

He looked down they aren’t too-o-o dirty.

He could hear the television. The rest of the family would be watching and wouldn’t see him tiptoe across the passage to the bathroom and close the door tightly.

While he waited for the bath to fill his mind wandered back to the game.  He saw himself diving through the air, taking that magnificent mark. He dropped a pretend football from his cupped hands, swung his leg and kicked his foot up in the air.

A blob of mud flew off the end of his boot. It landed on the bathroom mirror and sprayed muddy red spots all over the clean glass.

Ben’s mouth flew open. He reached out and pulled the lump off the glass. He turned on the washbasin tap but before he could put the soft slimy blob under the water it squeezed through his fingers and jumped onto the toothbrush holder. Red and green slime stuck to the bristles of dad’s toothbrush and dripped down the plastic handle.

Ben lunged for the blob, he missed and it swooshed past his eyes heading straight for a pair of mum’s fluffy pink slippers. Ben dived, pulling the slippers out of the way just before the blob splattered on the white floor tiles.

A relieved grin spread cross Ben’s face. Another great dive.

His smile soon disappeared as the blob bounced across the floor and up the wall.  It jumped onto the ceiling then jumped down the wall, across the floor and up the other wall.  Behind the blob stretched a long spotty trail of mud.

Ben suddenly remembered the bath. It was almost full. He dived again and turned off the taps then sat dejectedly on the side of the bath, his head in his hands.  I’m in big trouble. I’ll be grounded, no football, no pocket money for weeks, no pocket money EVER.

Out of the corner of his eye he saw the blob stop moving.  It hung on the wall just above the bathwater. It was only a small blob now.  Most of its mud was all around mum’s clean bathroom.

Ben moved closer, he felt a bit scared. Mud didn’t jump around all by itself.

He leant over until his eyes were close, but not too close. Inside the middle of the blob he could see two black eyes looking back at him. They blinked. Then the blob let go of the wall and splashed into the bath.  The warm water turned streaky brown as it swam around in a circle.

Ben dived his hand into the water.

Gotcha.He cupped his hands together tightly and then opened them a crack.  Inside sat a little brown frog.

He put it on the window sill while he opened the window. The frog blinked at Ben then hopped out into the night.  Ben turned around to the messy bathroom.

Into the bath went his boots. Into the bath went his clothes. He cleaned the slime off dad’s toothbrush.  He cleaned the mud off the floor.  He stretched up and cleaned the mud off the walls. He tried to clean the mirror but it was hard to get the streaks off. He also peeped around the door and checked the passage floor.

When the bathroom looked spotless he emptied the bath and filled it again with clean water and hopped in. He was exhausted. He lay back in the bath and looked up. There on the ceiling was the one brown spot he couldn’t reach.

Ben’s mum was very surprised to see that he had washed his dirty clothes and hung them on the clothes line. She said his boots were so clean they were almost like new. She said she hoped he wouldn’t forget to clean his boots next time he played football with his friends but to keep his dirty hands off the bathroom mirror as it was all smeared.

Ben knew he wouldn’t forget. He knew that spot on the bathroom ceiling would remind him.

 

 

The Story of Little Rain Drop

by

Catherine Fair

 

It was nearing the end of winter two thousand and nine, and the graduation class of the Spring Shower Academy, were enjoying their last few days of winter holidays.

It would soon be spring and one student in particular was extremely nervous. Little Rain Drop had just scraped through the theory exam at the end of last term and the thought of the practical test in a few days was spoiling the end of his holiday.

He had been practicing jumping from cloud to cloud for days to test which one to make his qualifying jump from. He had to find one that was just right. To fluffy and soft, and he would sink too far into the cloud, especially if it were a hot sunny day, he would evaporate before he hit the ground. Too hard and he would drop like a hailstone and crash through a chicken coop, a pig sty, or heaven forbid a greenhouse window. He had lost his big brother that way and that would never do.

Little Rain Drop had been living with his grandmother for quite a while now. His parents had gone to Queensland to help with the drought that was causing great hardship for the farmers. The crops were failing and because of this the cattle and sheep were dying of thirst and hunger. There had been a request for volunteers to go and help. If they could gather enough rain drops together, they could cause a huge downpour and save the crops and cattle and sheep. It was an important mission and Little Rain Drop was proud of them. He missed them very much but staying with his grandmother was the next best thing to having his parents at home. He was company for her, as she had been lonely since grandpa had passed away. Grandpa had been a very famous rain drop making over a thousand jumps before he had retired. Little Rain Drop was the last one of the family to graduate. So his jump had to be SPECIAL.

He had already picked his spot for landing. It was a kindergarten school in a small town in central Tasmania. Rain was scarce there even in winter, and he felt sorry for them. (Did you know that rain drops had very good eye sight? They need it to see where to land).

He had been watching the children at the school for a while, every time he went for a practice at cloud hopping. Their teacher had been teaching them all about vegetables and how they helped their young bodies and brains grow healthy and strong. They had so much to learn they needed all the help they could get.

The teacher had given them all a little patch of ground in the garden at the back of the school and some seedlings of – silver beet, cabbage, carrots, pumpkin, and peas. They each had their own few plants to look after, and she showed them what to do.

Little Rain Drop had heard some children laughing and teasing a little boy because his plants were not growing as well as the others. (Did you know that rain drops have good hearing too?) He had decided he would help him and had asked all his friends from his graduation class to help, as none of them liked to see anyone get bullied they agreed.

The problem seemed to be a lack of water. When the teacher gave the children a watering can they all got the chance to water their plants before going home but that they would have to be careful how much they used as it was very precious. The little boy was very shy and was always last to get the watering can by then there was only a few trickles left and he was afraid to ask the teacher for more in case he used it all up. Because of this his poor plants were very thirsty which was why they were not doing so well as the others. He himself didn't know what was wrong; he just thought he was not very good at gardening.

So Little Rain Drop kept on cloud hopping till he found the right cloud. It was not too soft and not too hard, just right, spongy but firm. His grandmother had given him a few tips which helped him in his choice.

At last it was the day of the test. He was feeling more confident now he had sorted everything out. Which cloud, where to land, and the fact that he was helping a little boy save his cabbages made him feel good about himself. He settled near the edge of the cloud; Wow! It was a long way down. "Now don't lose your nerve" he said to himself. He licked his finger and held it up to see which way the wind was blowing. "Good" he said "A gentle breeze" He repositioned himself slightly and waited for the examiner.

"Hello little fellow, are you ready for the jump?" the inspector said in a loud voice. "Y-Y-Yes" he stammered and swallowed hard hoping the examiner wouldn't hear the quiver in his voice.

"Ok, now just you take a deep breath to calm your nerves. I'll count to three, and then you take a good leap off the edge. Remember, if you do it right you will get a pass, if not, you will be evaporated back up here till you do get it right. Ok, good luck, one- two- three…"

Little Rain Drop balanced his tiny feet on the edge of the cloud, bent his knees, spread his arms out, closed his eyes and jumped!! Dropping through air he felt as if something was supporting him. He opened one eye and saw a flimsy cloud almost like a veil cradling and protecting him. He also had this warm comforting feeling that his brother was beside him taking the jump with him. Then as quickly as it had appeared, it disappeared, and he was dropping through the air free and easy as all his fears left him. He opened his other eye and looked around him. His friends were all around him, they were all enjoying every minute of it, smiling from ear to ear. "Good" he said "we are on track"

As the school came into view, he could see the children and their teacher coming out into the garden. The teacher picked up the watering can to fill it at the water tank. The little boy, who had ran over to see if his plants had survived the night, called out in delight "It's raining! It's raining!" He did a dance of joy and the other children joined in. It had been weeks since any of them had seen rain, so the teacher let them enjoy being out in it. She placed the watering can back beside the tank and said "We won't be using this today!"

Little Rain Drop and his friends yelled "Yippee" as they all landed around the little boy's cabbages, the extra heavy rain fall on his patch would soon have his plants catching up with the rest and there would be no need for the other children to laugh at him anymore. It's amazing what a spring shower can achieve.

The pupils from 'Spring Shower Academy' class of Two thousand and nine would all pass their exams with flying colours. Little Rain Drop had done his grandmother and his parents proud. It was the happiest day of his life.

 

THE END


 

RESULTS OF 2011 OPEN SHORT STORY COMPETITION

The winner was Brenda Slavoff with her story "Sophie's Friend." Second place went to Allan Jamieson for "City Animals." Third place to  Yvonne Fogarty. HM to  Pat Coy and  Marion Thompson.

SOPHIE'S FRIEND

Comments from the judge: Beautiful story, tightly written, writer gets straight into the story, good dialouge and satisfying ending.
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“Is Sophie home?" asked the smartly-dressed young woman at the front door.  She stood uncertainly, until glad recognition, like the sun, burst  upon the face of Sophie's mother.
     "Ahhh!  Ahhh!" she cried in Continental style, throwing wide the door, "You here, Lina?"
     Leanne smiled.  The old name sounded nostalgically to her ears.  It was ages since anyone had called her Lina.
     "All grown-up, all changed!  So good!  Look just like your mother now!"
     "I'm back from Melbourne only yesterday," said Leanne happily.  "I wanted to come home, and my fiance has agreed to settle in Hobart."
     "Engaged, too, huh?  Sophie!  Sophie, you got a visitor!  Lina come to see you!....  She must be out in the yard, smoking as usual - I don't let her smoke inside," she added, as she led her guest down the long passage, past the little icon light burning below the picture of a saint.
     "How is she?"
     This would be her first sight of Sophie in many years, but she had heard plenty.  She's a complete nutter now, old school friends were saying freely to her now.  Once they wouldn't have dared comment on Sophie to Leanne.  She was screaming for the police outside her house the other day.....I see her walking down the street, talking to herself, stopping people to ask for cigarettes.....
     "Sophie, you there?"
     A grudging voice came from beyond the new pergola, out of reach.  "What do you want?"
     "You got a visitor.  Lina here."
     Dead silence.
     Leanne's mind went back fifteen years, to two girls of Macedonian background, family friends, who had studied for exams together, sneaked out with boyfriends and covered for each other, tried to be thoroughly Australian, and yet loved the warm, colourful culture they returned to every evening.
     "Come inside right now and say hallo."
     "Get stuffed."
     Leanne felt her colour rise, despite herself.  Schizophrenia, that solitary hell on earth.  Yet after Leanne's car accident, when she wondered if she would ever walk normally again, Sophie had been her most loyal friend.  She hadn't forgotten any of the fun things they had done together.  Sophie had even talked openly about her times in psychiatric hospital, the shock treatment, the escape attempts, her delusions, hallucinations, voices. 
     "What sort of things did you see?" Leanne had once asked curiously. 
     "Just ridiculous things.  Stuff like geometric shapes." 
     "What did the voices say?" 
     "Oh stupid things, just stupid things." 
     Leanne's injuries had shown, Sophie's were within.  Then Leanne had gone to Melbourne to consult another specialist, and time, and many therapies, had done their work.  All she had to show for that dreadful smash now were a few scars, the one on her forehead a mere faint line, some recurring back pain and a very slight limp. 
     "I wrote to Leanne," said the scraping voice beyond the pergola.  "I never got a letter back."
     "But I did," Leanne cried.  "I wrote you several postcards and emailed you!"  Particularly about her engagement.
     "No you didn't."
     "You got letters, stop being silly.  She got them," added her mother.
     "I came to see how you are."
     A face peered round the column.  Pasty, blurred of feature, surrounded by the remembered mass of black hair.  A juvenile face still, tragically aged.
     "I never got a letter."
     "How are you?"
     "I lent you a photo of me and never got it back."
     "Did you?"  Leanne ransacked her memory.  It had been six years ago.  "Oh yes, I had it copied.  But I did return it."
     "No you didn't."
     "It was a lovely photo."
     "But I never got it back."
     Last time hadn't been like this.  Sophie had tried to give everything she owned to Leanne when she was leaving for Melbourne.  Both girls had been full of hope, Sophie talking feverishly of her "gorgeous" doctor, of getting married - "I'd rather get married later, than too young and end up getting divorced!"  Every Macedonian girl got married and had babies.
     Leanne, her head high, went back down the passage, Sophie's mother following humbly, saying, "You come another day, yes?  Hallo to your mother."
     Leanne didn't know how to answer.  At the front door they paused awkwardly.  Suddenly Sophie's mother hurried into one of the large bedrooms off the central passage.  She returned a moment later, clutching a beautifully embroidered tablecloth, which she thrust into Leanne's startled arms. 
     She whispered, "For your house," and patted Leanne's cheek.  She added sadly, "You're her only friend."
     Leanne understood that the tablecloth was her engagement present, and her hands trembled as she folded it.  She knew exactly where it had come from. 

     Every Macedonian girl had a glory box prepared by her mother in anticipation of the time when she was old enough to marry.....